如何提高英語寫作能力
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首先要在句式的基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練上下功夫,做到句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,表達(dá)無誤,并培養(yǎng)自己一句多譯的能力,進(jìn)行不同句式結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)訓(xùn)練。
上海新東方英語冬令營 介紹 同學(xué)們可以在表達(dá)多樣化上有所提升, 突破單一句式,使文章生動活潑、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。比如可以學(xué)會運(yùn)用以下表達(dá)方式:
1. 使用非謂語動詞形式
用非謂語動詞可以使句子簡潔。例如:
we were surrounded by a variety of buildings. we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. after the visit, we left the park and we felt joyful.
→surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. after the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.
2. 使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)
with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu), 也就是獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu),常作伴隨狀語以增加被描繪內(nèi)容的生動性,使文章讀起來更簡潔明了。
例如:
i could not go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me.
→i could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.(2004廣東卷)
3. 使用復(fù)合句
復(fù)合句可以把結(jié)構(gòu)松散的句子連接起來,從而使表達(dá)顯得高級。例如:
、 occasions are quite rare when i have the time to spend a day with my kids. (2008山東卷)
、 it is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute to the development of our society.
、 additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million smokers in china, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. what amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand smoke. (2010廣東高考考場作文)
4. 使用倒裝句, 強(qiáng)調(diào)句, 虛擬語氣等
使用這些句式可使文章化平淡為生動,加強(qiáng)語氣,使評卷老師感受到作者的強(qiáng)烈情感。
he did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.
→it was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. (強(qiáng)調(diào)句)
→not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. (倒裝句)
綜合使用以上句式, 長短句結(jié)合,可以增強(qiáng)句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。
要寫出好的文章,詞句的積累非常重要。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用一些常用的習(xí)慣表達(dá)和典型句式既能有效地減少文章中的病句,又能給文章添彩。
對課文中出現(xiàn)的佳句,同學(xué)們可以進(jìn)行摘錄。筆者創(chuàng)編了下面的幾個句子,同學(xué)們可以先口頭后書面練習(xí):
、 幫助他學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué), 對我來說也是一個顯擺自己的機(jī)會。
here was a chance for me to distinguish myself by helping him learn maths.
。ň毩(xí)表達(dá)distinguish oneself )
、 雖然做好了失敗的準(zhǔn)備,我仍然感到傷心并決定抓住每一分鐘更加努力提高我的英語。
prepared for the failure, i still felt upset and decided to work even harder to seize every minute to improve my english.
。ň毩(xí)過去分詞作狀語;表達(dá)seize every minute to do sth. )
、 被她的耐心所感動,我對自己的粗魯行為感到尷尬并決定學(xué)做有耐心的人,這有助于我與同學(xué)、朋友和父母很好地相處。
moved by her patience, i felt embarrassed for my rude behavior and decided to learn to be a patient person, which helps me get along well with my classmates, my friends and my parents.
(練習(xí)過去分詞作狀語;定語從句的用法)
、 只有把競爭和合作相聯(lián)合,才能有助于我們達(dá)到目標(biāo)并滿足自身需求。
only when competition combines with cooperation can it help in obtaining our goals and satisfying our needs.
(練習(xí)倒裝句;表達(dá)obtain one?蒺s goal, satisfy one?蒺s needs)
這樣,一些好詞、好的表達(dá)、好的句式,經(jīng)過反復(fù)的語言實踐后,已經(jīng)“內(nèi)化”成自己的東西,用時自然“輕車熟路”。
高中生在日常英語寫作中,最大的問題是詞匯量不足,想表達(dá)某種意思,但“茶壺倒餃子”,表達(dá)不出來,大腦一片空白,絞盡腦汁拼命“擠出”幾個單詞和幾個簡單的句子,還有可能詞不達(dá)意或表達(dá)不得體,這與平時不重視詞匯積累有關(guān)。
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